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Comment on a Colleague’s Work #2

Today, I will be giving my opinion on my classmate Andrew Hudgin's Blog Assignment 7. This blog assignment is about creating an original editorial or commentary. Hudgin has created a commentary called   Iran Nuclear Deal. Hudgins starts with the reason of what the U.S. did, which was withdrawing from the Iran Nuclear Deal. So far so good, but the next two sentences confused me at first on what was the deal agreed on. The lack of commas, in the first paragraph, and some grammar errors are the reason why I had to read twice his work. However, the use of meaningful words and descriptions in the rest of the blog helped me realize that even though the deal was not going as planned, it is the first step that might have an impact in the other nations related to the dangerous use of nuclear weaponry. Overall, this commentary is a great start, but if it is well-edited and proofread, it will make easier to spot the likely impact that this deal agreed on would have.

Our Government part two.

Our US Government Today, I will refine my last opinion about the U.S government. My last opinion of our government was based on what I have learned in my U.S government college class and this time will be more specific with examples.  The structure of our government was constituted in the 18th century, and since then it has been adapting to facilitate and please the common citizens. It's incredible to reflect on the past and realize how our government was not even ready to be called a first world country. The government used to be ruled by white land-owning males. Nobody but them had the right to vote and decide the future of our country. It's been quite a long time since that, and now there are still people that think or assure that their rights have been snatched from their hands. I think this is demonstrated during the elections.  In my opinion, our votes are not being counted as it ought to be. Our votes are for deciding which representative of a party go and v
Today, I will give my constroctive opinion on one of my classmates' work done on March 30th, 2018. My classmate Angela De Cello, and she wrote about enhancing and fortifying the gun rights of the citizens. On her blog  she argues about the how the constitution is outdated and lacks of laws (rights) that our modern day citizens do not need for their sake. I trully believe that she wrote a well-organized and neat comment about the gun rights issues that our nation currently faces.  She gave her own ideas for laws that would regulate the use and sale of guns to certain people. Also, with some examples of the consequence of having irrelevant laws. With all that being said, she portraied her idea with resanoble examples, and did a great job writting this blog in a way that her audience can easily understand.

Our US Government bu Jorge Rodriguez

Our US Government My opinion of our government will be based on what I have learned in my U.S government college class. With that being said, if my opinion sounds kind of bizarre it's all because my knowledge in this topic is ridiculously lower than maybe my readers. Our government was created in the 18th century, and since then it has been adapting to fit in and fix the major problems in society happening at the time. However, whatever the government changes within it, it will always make uncomfortable, or even disturb some group of people. There will be always these controversial topics that the government has been really delicate to maintain stability, for example, the right to bear guns. These type of topics has shown the struggle our government has faced throughout its existence. So far, I think the government has done whatever is available to satisfy the necessity of their citizens. Although, I'm pretty sure there have been mistakes that have cost the government millio

Blog 03/08/2018

Is Trump Running The U.S Like His Businesses? Written by Nancy LeTourneau, and published in Washington Monthly in March 5th, 2018. At the beginning of the blog, LeTourneau mentioned some of the promises that Trump said during his campaign. Like "We’re going to be very fair, we’re going to be very flexible but we’re going to protect the American worker as I said I would do in my campaign" (Letourneau's blog). She then mentioned the Trump administration issue, "asking Beijing for a plan to cut the annual U.S. trade deficit with China by $100 billion" ((Letourneau's blog). LeTourneau describes this type of trades as extortion from the administration of Trump. These acts that our president has taken, has triggered other countries to take action on Trump's management as president. Her intended audience are those who strongly support and do not support Trump, passionate people in politics, and business men whose jobs are tied to the different countries Trump

Critique of "Trump said he 'alone can fix it,' and now it's absolutely true."

The newspaper USA Today published an opinion called " Trump said he 'alone can fix it,' and now it's absolutely true ." This article expresses the opinion of Gabriel Schoenfeld, a former member of USA Today, and tells us about the actions that our president took towards the incident of Mueller and the horrific Florida school massacre. Gabriel also mentions others deeds that impacted us in not a great way, for instance: a historic tax cut and the invigoration of the economy. Gabriel tells us that the presidency of Mr. Trump is collapsing, and that he has given the country some "accomplishments" for which he will be remembered. The approach that Gabriel takes in his opinion can represent most of the people affected by this atrocities. I agree that our president should take immediate action. Also, the comment trump once said, "I alone can fix it," which some people could argue that he is not even taking seriously this situations. But, Trump is ri

New York Times' Article

On February 5, 2018. The New York Times  posted an article about how our president Trump  Mocks ‘Little Adam Schiff’ . This is one little peek at what our new president behaves, and we should be aware. Mr. Adam Schiff is being accused of leaking important democratic information, and our Mr. president Trump tried to block the release of this democratic document.  Democrats were clearly nervous about what might happen during the White House review period. Representative Adam B. Schiff of California, the Intelligence Committee’s top Democrat, said the Democrats had already shared their memo with the F.B.I. and the Justice Department and would seek specific explanations from the department and the White House for any changes they might request.